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Date        : 2007/03/08 13:29
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  But where is he ? And what about the four others ? That I don't know, and probably few people can answer that question. The "[[Mad Mage]]" is now grumbling alone in his solitary tower about his younger days, when he ran on the Earth to save people with his four friends, but who is to believe the bearded man with foolish, tearful eyes ?
  
  As for myself, I don't know, and here ends my knowledge about [[world:Brittany]]'s Past.
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  ===== Story of Lorkas the Fallen =====
  
  I'll tell you about [[Lorkas]] of Amudrias, and how he found the [[White Bird of Hope]], and how he capitained it, opening the [[Gates of the Sun]], and some stuff like that.
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  Anyway, as every wise man knows, [[Lorkas]] was no angelic creature of divine essence, or even a magical creation of a godly force.
  
  Some say that [[Khelens]] is the Beginning, first of the Cities of Men. That, too, is untrue: before the Age of Khelens was the Time of the Kingdoms at War. And before them, the Era of [[Songor]] the Great. And going back through the thick book of history, you'll cross Arnistar of the Desert Dwellers, the Republic of the Two Rivers, and the Ancient Haemdel, and the Kingdom of the [[Long Wall]]. And before it, the forgotten [[towers of light]] that [[Horadrists]] built.
  
- [[Lorkas]] was born in [[Kuratas]], a small agrarian state that existed on the [[Coronian Valley]], when [[Songer]] and [[Khelens]] were still in infancy. He was a boy that wanted to see everything, to understand the world and its stars, and discover its limits, for it was extending much further than the mists of his home valley.
+ [[Lorkas]] was born in [[Kuratas]], a small agrarian state that existed on the [[Coronian Valley]], when [[Songor]] and [[Khelens]] were still in infancy. He was a boy that wanted to see everything, to understand the world and its stars, and discover its limits, for it was extending much further than the mists of his home valley.
  
  
  But life was rude in [[Kuratas]], and trying to think about anything else than your next harvest wasn't well perceived by most; and, more than often, [[Lorkas]] dreamed with tears and despair about the Mountains with the white tops, and Seas that ended only when they touched the sky, far away.
  


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